Thursday, November 3, 2016


The Haunted woods.On a fine night something was swimming he did not see anything but then there was a big monster coming for him. Once he tried a marshmallow he loved It. He fell in love with the marshmallow .He wished  he was a marshmallow monster also he wished he was in marshmallow land. But he was not. He was sad so  the boy gave him more marshmallows. He was so happy he loved It. He lickd the boy like he wanted to eat him but he but he didn't because he could give him more marshmallows. He wanted to go  home but his parents were gone. He didn't know where to go so he walked and walked and walked. Until  he found his house because it said his name on the house and his parents names on the house. Then he ran away back to camp where the monster was. The monster was  in his bag and grabbed all the marshmallows because the monster wants more marshmallows. Then BOOM! The monster ate all of the marshmallows and the monster got angry and chased after him then the boy holding a white pillow in front of him so the monster thought it was a marshmallow and the boy was right he thought It was a marshmallow and so the boy threw it away in the forest and the monster ran after it and then the boy ran away in the forest. The monster saw him run away so he went to the camp fire and grabbed a stick and put the white pillow on the stick and put it in front of the fire and then BOOM! The white pillow burned and the monster was sad.The end From Noah and Dani.

1 comment:

  1. noah!!! this is Dani I like the work that we did enjoy doing that. So can you me typey fast


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