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Thursday, May 25, 2017

The Haunter my story part 1 and 2

Hi  Im Jackson I'm going tell you a story about  A HAUNTED House With a small kids ghost.They say that he was all alone cause his parents went out on a Holiday and he didn't come, he hid when they left. He was screaming for his parents at night. Believe me, I hear him every night. Where was I oh yeah...

He was so sad that he went on the roof and he danced. Then he got STRUCK BY LIGHTNING and died. The parents came back and were  sad that they could not find him. Since they were so sad they left this town.
Then went to another town but they left there boys ghost behind. He BECAME THE HAUNTER OF CARTER HOUSE.

So  our teacher was telling us some homework to do she said I you to do this work the first group will do this this are the things are scary houses haunted are they real? Why and how to plants breath? Do Aliens exist?
I did not want to be in the group of ‘Are Haunted Houses Real?’ I would like to do the plant   one.
The teacher called out the names for the haunted house group connor summer buzzy and jackson NOOOOOOO!!! I said why that group but summer was in that group
oh yeah I’ve had a mad crush on her since she saved me from a real volcano that me and her builded.
This was the chance to show her how brave and how cool I am yes but could my plan work?

We all meet at carter's house on halloween night.
my mum said congrats I told them cause they might not want me going dad said I could take his video camera.
I was there early
then I seen a green orange light in the carters house I quickly turned the video camera on play then when I played something knocked it out of my hand and it got smashed and
then buzzy came and said what was that for? I said something knocked it out of my hand why did you play it anyway there was a light up there  and I recorded it and
then something or somebody knocked it out of my hand.
Then all the other people of the group came
Then we went in then it went cold….
Then I heard a noise. You will never leave this house ALIVE! HUH? Connor what was that? I said really it wasn't me Connor said. You did that to scare jackson we all know don’t lie summer said No really I did not say that trust me connor Said. Then If he didn't say that
then who did? Maybe The ghost I said let's check the ghost talk monitor to see if we recorded that ghost talk if it was a ghost she said staring at connor.
He said what i'm not the ghost am I.  You're Weird conner Why would you be the ghost?
Then when we left the ghost followed me … To be continued on book two the haunter Part 2.
We went to school and we lost the prize the plants one won the 50 dollar voucher.
YAY! THEY SCREAMED!!!!!!!!! GOD it was really noisy I wish they would stop.
Then I heard a Voice What I said I heard it again it was coming from my head
I listened it said go up on your desk and jump and dance like a crazy man
I said no
Then he said do It
Then I heard a click I jumped on top of the table the Teacher said what are you doing jackson?
Get off the table jackson she said
Then I jumped and danced like a crazy MAN!
Everybody laughed.
Then finally I stopped.
Jackson what was that  you are normally not like that why did you do that jackson? The teacher said.
Then I heard the sound from my head again it said good job.
I will be back soon!
The teacher said to go to the school nurse to see if I had a temper and
Then I heard the voice it said to rip the pillow and eat it.
And I heard the click again OH NO! I said the nurse said what?
Then I ripped the pillow and ate it she said stop stop it jackson.
Then I stopped very good job the voice said in my head you did good.
Then she called my parents.
They came and picked me up and we went home and they put me to bed to sleep.



2 comments:

  1. Hi Noah, it's Mrs Pam. woo, this is pretty scary. You have lots of interesting things happening. I really like how you have ended your story with ..to be continued...I am looking forward to seeing Part 2!

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  2. Wow Noah, what an interesting story. I really like the main character you have included lots of details that tell me about who he is. That would be a pretty scary situation I am glad that nothing like that has ever happened to me! Can't wait to read the next bit!

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